It Hurts Us
Submission for the Envelope Art part of the 2007 EB Siege.
PERFECT 10! The score will say 1.10, but it's actually 10.
Submission for the Envelope Art part of the 2007 EB Siege.
PERFECT 10! The score will say 1.10, but it's actually 10.
Author | Title | Description | Date | Rank |
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kenisu3000 | Chapter 2 - Page 70: Clash of the Bumpkins |
kenisu - #70
I look back on this and wonder, why isn't Ninten getting as much use out of that bat as he can? Was I so absent-minded at the time I didn't even think to have him bash the crows, even though he's got the thing *right there in his hand*? |
4/16/10 | 0.00 |
kenisu3000 | Chapter 2 - Page 71: When Evil Reared its Ugly Head... |
kenisu - #71
Character development can be painful. It's actually starting to annoy *me* how much of a wuss Ninten is this early on. Still, you try taking on that many foes by yourself, with nothing but a tattered old baseball bat... |
4/16/10 | 0.00 |
kenisu3000 | Chapter 1 - Page 37: Ninten Takes Responsibility |
kenisu - #37
It wasn't until I started this page when I realized that the Tattered Bat Ninten's been carrying around is in his hand in some panels... and not there in others. The first time I screwed up was on the last page, when the door slams behind him and Minnie. And here in the first panel, I guessed he just must have... switched it to his left hand so that he could use his inhaler. Yeah. |
5/27/07 | 0.00 |
kenisu3000 | Chapter 2 - Page 72: Hippie, Be Good |
kenisu - #72
You're just not a MOTHER fan if you're not hearing the Hippie theme music here. |
4/16/10 | 0.00 |
kenisu3000 | Chapter 2 - Page 73: Don't Insult My MOTHER |
kenisu - #73
Much as I wanted to leave the backgrounds of panels 2 and 3 plain white, I caved and colored them in. As you can see. And it's probably easy enough to guess, but the Hippie's prayer was originally "Ekke, ekke, ekke, ekke, p'tang, zoo-boing, zow zing". I'm not sure if I felt that Monty Python references are hardly even funny anymore now that everyone gets them, or if I felt too much like I was swiping the phrase in slimeball fashion, but either way, eventually I just invented my own chant for him. |
4/16/10 | 0.00 |