Author   |
Title |
Description |
Date |
Rank |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 1 - Page 33: A Force Beyond Control |
kenisu - #33
Shading can be a beast on pages like this one. |
4/19/07 | 0.00 |
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 1 - Page 34: The Main Course |
kenisu - #34
I think I might have been hungry when I wrote that "appetizer" line of Ninten's. Speaking of food, the orange-and-tan coloring on the dollhouse on the very bottom of the page makes me hungry for a Peanut Cheese Bar. BOING! |
4/19/07 | 0.00 |
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 1 - Page 35: Shut Up |
kenisu - #35
I know plenty of households where the children are put in time out if they use naughty language like "shut up". I looked at this after I finished it and I realized that Minnie's keeping her composure quite well through all this craziness. Whatever. All I know is, I had been chomping at the bit to get out of Ninten's room, and now I'm already chomping at the bit to get out of Mimmie's Room! I hereby dub this room Purple Hell. |
5/5/07 | 0.00 |
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 1 - Page 36: Kreepy Kewpie and the Son of Lampy |
kenisu - #36
...I honestly don't have anything to say here. I suppose this is one of those "in-betweener" pages. |
5/12/07 | 0.00 |
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 1 - Page 37: Ninten Takes Responsibility |
kenisu - #37
It wasn't until I started this page when I realized that the Tattered Bat Ninten's been carrying around is in his hand in some panels... and not there in others. The first time I screwed up was on the last page, when the door slams behind him and Minnie. And here in the first panel, I guessed he just must have... switched it to his left hand so that he could use his inhaler. Yeah. |
5/27/07 | 0.00 |
