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Other Submissions by kenisu3000
Author   |
Title |
Description |
Date |
Rank |
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| kenisu3000 | "Whose Hat is This?" coloring book, pgs. 11 & 12 |
whohat - #07
So why aren't Ninten and Lloyd all decked out in warm clothing? That's the beauty of cartoons - it doesn't have to make sense. Page 12 has to be my absolute favorite :) It's all about the disgusting sneezing. Of course, I was pulling a wink at the game again, where you have to be careful who you talk to in Snowman, or they just might cough all over you and give you a cold. So originally I was going to make it a cough, but I decided sneezing would be infinitely funnier. |
9/25/06 | 0.00 |
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 1 - Page 30: The Biggest Insult Ever |
kenisu - #30
Anyone should be able to figure out what happens in the next page :) And kudos to whoever can guess where I got the phrase "awww, peas!" |
2/10/07 | 0.00 |
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 2 - Page 83: Resolve |
kenisu - #83
This was a pretty tricky business, trying to come up with lines that, to my ears, didn’t sound corny and overused, and at the same time making sure the gestures didn’t climb into “Milking the Giant Cow” territory. I’m still not even sure if this succeeded. That’s a carnation on the Mothersday welcome sign, by the way. |
5/24/10 | 0.00 |
| kenisu3000 | "Whose Hat is This?" coloring book, pg. 15 (end) |
whohat - #09
Okay, so I had only been given a maximum of 16 pages to illustrate this book, and with the title page, that meant that page 15 was it. Corny lines ("they were happy; they had made a new friend") aside, it really does close things out a little too quickly to say "after Anna gave her father the medicine..." The famous author Mark Twain once said, "Don't just SAY the woman screamed: bring her out and let her scream!" This means that it's best to draw things out in the story so that it feels more natural, but here I had run out of pages, and had set up a plot exposition that was never to be shown. As a result, we never get to see Anna's father (not here, anyway; we'll see him in my comic series though). |
9/25/06 | 0.00 |
| kenisu3000 | Patches the Wonder Cat |
Welcome to Magicat... err, Magicant!
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3/13/09 | 0.00 |
